I have completed an initial plan on the opening two minutes of a thriller. However this is only a brief plan on what I expect to film in the coming weeks and there are a number of things that may have to change such as the use of a cigarette just in case we have to film in school. The opening will consist of three separate scenes all surrounding the killings of a psycho. However not all of the scenes will show the antagonist as the second scene will present the aftermath with the police from the murder in the opening scene. I plan to use scene three to show how the murderer has no boundaries and will kill anyone who tries to get in his way.
Scene 1
Opening credits – Superimposed onto wall
Pan into antagonist walking.
Antagonist costume – Trench coat,
sunglasses and headphones
Mid shot behind the antagonist – follow
until the door where the camera stops
Antagonist takes time at the door – goes to
knock then kicks the door open
The music intensifies and the camera
becomes shaky as it follows antagonist into the room
Woman has a paper with a headline referring
to the killer
Mid shot of antagonist drawing out a knife
Close up of the woman’s face showing her
fear – uncomfortably close
Close up of the knife with the killer
touching it sensually
Shot from the killer's eyes – Woman screams,
pans across to the other side of room where woman runs into shot
Reverts to mid shot- knife pulled back and
camera ducks behind object to obscure view
Camera pans back up showing woman bleeding
and the killer celebrating in the foreground
Mid shot of the woman slumping to the floor
From the floor – canted angle from woman’s
eyes of killer’s feet approaching
Black outs creates ellipses as the killer
gets close and closer
Headphones dropped into front of shot and
the camera pans up as the killer bends down until the camera reaches his
shoulders
Mid shot with tripod – killer rises from the
corpse after stroking her face, pulls the knife out of her and she groans,
wipes the blood of the curtain then puts it away, pulls out a bigger knife and
slashes her throat.
Blood splatters onto wall spelling out
DUALITY
Scene 2
Camera flash, close up of woman’s face/neck
Pan, circle around the room, protagonist,
shot behind of him entering the room
Pulls out a cigarette – close up of him
lighting the cigarette then mid shot of him turning around to talk to other
detective
Protagonist speaks to second detective
Looks
like a standard job, nothing stolen, two clean wounds, seven inches in
diameter, what do you think chief is it him?
Of
course it was him, why else would I be here?
How
can you be so sure, it’s a big city, you and me both know there’s at least a
dozen murders a night in this part of town.
How
do I know? *close up of his face looking at the
body* I wouldn’t be good at my job if I didn’t
know.
Talks to
another extra detective – asks him a question
Protagonist
walks towards door, camera panning around, close up
Mid shot
from behind, protagonist takes one last drag
Focus
pull over his shoulder, press come running towards detective, ask questions:
This is the ninth murder in the case so far,
do you have any new leads?
It seems funny how you all seem to be taking
your time about it.
Protagonist
gets angry and throws reporters notepad to the floor
Fades to
black
Scene 3
Fade into scene
Wide shot watching killer walk past a tramp sat on floor
Tramp asks the killer for change
Mid shot from behind of killer reaching into his jacket pocket
Close up of wallet falling onto floor
Over shoulder shot showing tramp reach for wallet and the killer's hand stamp on it
Close up of tramp looking scared
Back to wide shot of tramp being stabbed multiple times, kicks the tramp and takes the wallet
Mid shot of the tramp dead with footstep Foley
Fade to black
Fade into scene
Wide shot watching killer walk past a tramp sat on floor
Tramp asks the killer for change
Mid shot from behind of killer reaching into his jacket pocket
Close up of wallet falling onto floor
Over shoulder shot showing tramp reach for wallet and the killer's hand stamp on it
Close up of tramp looking scared
Back to wide shot of tramp being stabbed multiple times, kicks the tramp and takes the wallet
Mid shot of the tramp dead with footstep Foley
Fade to black
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